- The name badge is a bit unclear
- Not sure if you have showed enough on the point of unorganised within the typeface
- Some Letters dont fit within the sequence
- Some more experimentation to be done with counters
Action to be taken:
- Instead of putting the letters on angles and different spacings lay them out in a fixed order so they are more clear and dont angle them, this will allow them to be much more clear.
- Put more lowercase letters in to emphasise the unorganised idea, possibly change round the alphabet so it does go from A-Z. This will mix it up more and give the idea of how unorganised he is.
- Fix the few letters which dont fit by experimenting with different ways of rounding them off or filling in the counters.
- Rotate the counters and see what happens.
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