- "Whats the relationship between pantone and a hair salon? Design concept is strong just lacking research and development sheets."
- "composition?"
- "Relevance of "Colour company"
- "has hair got its own colour system?"
- "Sort out the negative leading on charts. Legibility issues change font for copy - habara? choose another font sans serif - helvetica - univers - gothem
Action to be taken:
- tidy up pie charts
- more variations
- use some tracing paper as stock for graphs.
- change the font on the charts
- make the colour company being a salon more clear
- do more design sheets to put down instead of doing them in sketchbook so its easier for people to follow my work.
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